His official name is Repùblica Federativa Do Brazil, The language official is Portuguès, Brazil is the biggest country in South America.
Brazil is the country that more tourists receives at the year in South America in ther, The tourism is the more important activity in brazil.In the other hand The economy of Brazil is the most powerful of Latin America and the sixth one worldwide.
The climate of Brazil changes according to the altitude and the latitude of the zone ,for example The climate of Rio de Janeiro is tropical, with (73,4 º Fahrenheit). The city is famous for the beaches of Copacabana and Ipanema, And other attraction of this city is the big statue of Christ, the "Cristo Redentor".
The Carnavl is the most famous celebration , in this carnaval the school of samba dancing in front the different peoples The dancers dress clothes very little and with many colors , the all peoples enjoy this Carnaval that it is realized the second week of Febrary.
Fro this reason and other more is very important to know brazil, his culture, geography and the most important his people.
WRITEN BY : MONICA SANTANA
Brazil is the country that more tourists receives at the year in South America in ther, The tourism is the more important activity in brazil.In the other hand The economy of Brazil is the most powerful of Latin America and the sixth one worldwide.
The climate of Brazil changes according to the altitude and the latitude of the zone ,for example The climate of Rio de Janeiro is tropical, with (73,4 º Fahrenheit). The city is famous for the beaches of Copacabana and Ipanema, And other attraction of this city is the big statue of Christ, the "Cristo Redentor".
The Carnavl is the most famous celebration , in this carnaval the school of samba dancing in front the different peoples The dancers dress clothes very little and with many colors , the all peoples enjoy this Carnaval that it is realized the second week of Febrary.
Fro this reason and other more is very important to know brazil, his culture, geography and the most important his people.
WRITEN BY : MONICA SANTANA
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Remember that "people" is plural, it doesn't need an "s". Very good piece of writing because is understandable.
Good job!
Corrections:
-the most important(no:the more important)
-the Brazilian economy(no: the economy in Brazil)
-different people(no:different peoples-People is plural)
-All people(no:the all peoples)
-It is carried out on the second week of February(no:it is realized the second week of Febrary)
-to visit Brazil(no:to know Brazil)
Dear Monica,
Make the corrections.
Keep on writing!
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